Undergraduate / Appeal essay for pharm (NUS) [4]

hey everyone,im appealing for pharm in nus and i hope to get some sincere feedbacks.thanks in advance.

`To hope is a duty not a luxury'. This particular phrase has been my inspiration so far and more so, now because in each and every one of us there is a private hope and dream and mine is to be a pharmacist ever since I was introduced to the world of chemistry and biology during my pre-university years. I know I have the utmost passion towards chemistry especially organic chemistry and being in healthcare. Passion and interest may be hard to gauge in someone, but I am very sure I have it in me. Hours and hours of googling anything related to pharmacy and chemistry is something I do not merely for academic purposes only but to feed my interest as well. That said, assiduity comes with passion, and that is maybe what I need to overcome my shortcomings in my grades or my co-curricular activities. At the end of the day, all I'm asking for is to give me a chance and to see the potential in me.

i feel like writing another essay after this..haha..