Undergraduate / "Enriching my life in college" - Summer Bridge Program, why i am interested in it. [5]

Please be completly honest, because this program decides whether or not i get in.
Open to all criticism, thank you!

I had to explain why i wanted the CARE program.

Undergraduate / Risk I took running for Student Government - Common App [3]

I loved how detailed everything was the imagery behind it!
I like how you put what you learned in the end, but i feel like you didnt eloborate enough on that.