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Nov 19, 2010
Writing Feedback / Raw food vs Cooked food - How's my intro? [13]
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Raw food vs Cooked food
Many people do not know about raw foods and the benefits of these raw foods. They just eat cooked and processed food when they are hungry that lacks of nutrients. In addition, there are a lot of foods in American that are either cooked or processed. People do not realize how harmful these foods are and how in danger they may be for eating cooked foods. People think that cooked foods are real food, but in reality, they are not real food at all. The truth is that cooked food has most of the nutrients destroyed due to the heat. Also, Cooking destroys the live enzymes that aid in digestion and health. ." If you eat food that is enzyme-less, your body will not get maximum utilization of the food. This causes toxicity in the body. (Can you guess why over 75% of Americans are overweight?)" -The Living and Raw Foods F.A.Q. There have been many researches by scientific about eating raw foods that they prevent diseases, how good they are for you, and they contain the actual nutrients that our body needs. After I reveal the fact, raw food will the winner.
How's my introduction? I want to make it perfect and then start writing. Feel free to correct my grammar, etc. You may edit to make it better.
Raw food vs Cooked food
Many people do not know about raw foods and the benefits of these raw foods. They just eat cooked and processed food when they are hungry that lacks of nutrients. In addition, there are a lot of foods in American that are either cooked or processed. People do not realize how harmful these foods are and how in danger they may be for eating cooked foods. People think that cooked foods are real food, but in reality, they are not real food at all. The truth is that cooked food has most of the nutrients destroyed due to the heat. Also, Cooking destroys the live enzymes that aid in digestion and health. ." If you eat food that is enzyme-less, your body will not get maximum utilization of the food. This causes toxicity in the body. (Can you guess why over 75% of Americans are overweight?)" -The Living and Raw Foods F.A.Q. There have been many researches by scientific about eating raw foods that they prevent diseases, how good they are for you, and they contain the actual nutrients that our body needs. After I reveal the fact, raw food will the winner.