Undergraduate / the Lawrence school - extra curricular activity- band [4]

dear madam,

thanks for u r correction. kindly see and again correct it.

aishwary

During the tryouts for the 151st Founder's day, the band master and the band major were amazed at my performance and made me the band sergeant. When the grand maze was passed on to me, my band major said, "It is not just a maze but a test of responsibility and leadership".

The Lawrence School Band is famous across the country. Students of this school, dream to play and march to the beat of the band from their Preparatory clases, and I was no exception.I was thrilled beyond my wildest dreams when my childhood fantasy was realized, when I was selected for the band in class 9.

Band to me is equivalent of transcendental meditation. It rejuvenates, relaxes, connects and gives an adrenaline rush that is woth all the cristicism and negative marks, i sometimes encounter. I have a lot to learn in the field of instruments. I am looking forward to learn more and reach the zenith of my accomplishments in college.

Writing Feedback / Working women have happier lives. for or against? [4]

it is good topic, and sure to write in possitive only.

more and more advantage to the society and to nation, where women work as an employee. some data you can add from developed contries and underdeveped contries.

women will be happier in life because they will be decesion makers, when they do work.

Undergraduate / I seek truth. My drive to find the right question and learn the true answer defines who I am. [10]

yes,

honesty is the best policy. truth is only one, and lies are thousand sencences. to truth comes after telling 1000 lies statements.

in decision making ture problems should be findout by boss, to that best treatment he can provide.

add more u r experiences of truth and lies in u r society.