Undergraduate / UCF ESSAY 3: why did you chose to apply to UCF? correct and comment. [3]

3. Why did you choose to apply to UCF?

Opening the mailbox and receiving invitations to take a tour on college campuses
from many different universities, University of Central Florida stood out the most. The colors gold and black determine dedication and commitment in my mind. The summer of 2010, taking a tour around the campus I noticed many diversity of students and clubs that the school offered that I can easily connect with such as Sports club only because sports has been with me throughout my life. The atmosphere and energy around the campus is what made me want to become a Knight. While talking to fellow students, it was easy to socialize and greet new people that became my new friends in an instance. Also the location of University of Central Florida is close to home but also far enough for me to live on my own and adjust to a different life style.

Wanting to become a Computer Network Engineer, University of Central Florida has a highly academic profile on the passing rate of students and makes me want to join that graduation line after the 4 years of study and well rounded time. Being able to attend the University of Central Florida, I know this college will give me a positive future and being able to live on this campus will give me the future I have dreamed about since visiting the university this summer.