Undergraduate / "I want to be different" - UC Personal Statement Prompt 1 [6]

Dear Mine,

I think you have enough experiences to back up who you claim to be, but what you are missing is defining who you are. The prompt ask you how your experience relates to who you are and I think your essay will be complete when you can clarify who you are or who you want to be. There are some free resources you may find helpful at essayvision.com