ming2326
Nov 22, 2010
Undergraduate / "Opportunity in China, math" - essay about personal perspective & life experience [2]
I am not a native and therefore my essay writing skill is not very well```could somebody help me to improve my essay? And there is one major problem: the maximum is 500 words and I already wrote 600. Can somebody help me to shorten it?
The topic is: How would your academic interests, personal perspective and life experience add to the diversity of college campus.
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For fourteen years, I was taught that there is one rule in this world: the winners survive. I was born and raised in China, a country with fifteen billion people. Everybody there strives for opportunity.
Opportunity in China is not easy to get. People must constantly be alert and more importantly, well prepared. Maybe that explains why many parents send their children to one-on-one tutoring while they are still in...
I am not a native and therefore my essay writing skill is not very well```could somebody help me to improve my essay? And there is one major problem: the maximum is 500 words and I already wrote 600. Can somebody help me to shorten it?
The topic is: How would your academic interests, personal perspective and life experience add to the diversity of college campus.
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For fourteen years, I was taught that there is one rule in this world: the winners survive. I was born and raised in China, a country with fifteen billion people. Everybody there strives for opportunity.
Opportunity in China is not easy to get. People must constantly be alert and more importantly, well prepared. Maybe that explains why many parents send their children to one-on-one tutoring while they are still in...