Undergraduate / Mint Chocolate Chip ICE CREAM- COMMON APP ESSAY [9]

I like the analogy!

However I think you need to organize your thoughts into paragraphs, if possible. I don't know if you just didn't format it well for the website, but if not, I agree with bluedolphinz. It needs to be separated into sections. :)

I'm sure once it's formatted, it'll be fantastic. The comparison is interesting and original! Good Luck!