Scholarship / "The language of the universe" Hispanic Scholarship Fund- a recent academic challenge [3]

A few years ago, my dream was to become a physicist; I wanted to be the next Einstein. I had read many books about physics and I was very familiar with terms such as bosom, quark, and gluon, and names such as Schrodinger and Faraday.

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I believe this should be, "become the next Einstein"

However, I wanted to do something to help humanity in the short-term. I wanted to see my dreams come true. I wanted to materialize my thoughts.

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Dicton

Other than those two things, solid essay!

I just created a thread too, assess mine?