Undergraduate / Is the beginning of my SOP for MS in Computer Science appealing enough? [3]

Hii,

It would be better to start with describing how you ended up developing keen interest in Computer Engineering. Rather than just stating them like "After consideration of my academic background, sufficient exposure to Computer Science subjects", it would be more effective if you elaborate them a little bit. This is what i think.

All the best.

Research Papers / Need points/advice on Global Warming (I am opposed to it) [4]

Hi,

Humans played a major part in global warming. So supporting humans (in this context) wouldn't fetch u many points and also its difficult to strengthen ur essay that way.