Undergraduate / "the nectar to the intellectual bees" - what makes Stanford a good place for you [2]

Tell us what makes Stanford a good place for you

In my eyes, Stanford is the nectar to the intellectual bees. It is an epicenter where talented students and professors around the world gather. I strongly believe it is a conducive and environment that can inspire me to succeed like many other Standford students before me. I greatly understand that success does not come easily and hard work alone will not allow me to achieve it. It is the optimism, character as well as intelligence that are required of me and I am certain that Stanford would also emphasize on these values. Stanford has successful track record of producing and training people to succeed in business and finding employment. Its state-of-the-art facilities are something worth commendable too. I just want to call Stanford Home.

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