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doublek1229   
Dec 22, 2010
Graduate / Starting my essay for Physician's Assistant Program [5]

I have to write a 500 word maximum personal statement as to why I want to become a Physician's Assistant.

I wanted to run this idea by people to see what the general consensus is.

When I was younger I attended a cancer survivors day, and remember one particularly moving and motivating speech by a patient who was told he had months to live. 10 years later, here he was delivering a speech cancer free. He spoke about how before his encounter with cancer he took life for granted. He then went on to speak about how he became appreciative and observant of things he never before had such as the leaves changing colors, the beauty of the world, and every moment was precious.

I was thinking about starting to paper off with a quote from him, then explaining how it moved me and motivated me to go into the medical field.

Is this a good idea? I think it could potentially be very captivating as well as creative. Thanks for the input and thoughts.
doublek1229   
Dec 23, 2010
Graduate / Starting my essay for Physician's Assistant Program [5]

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I am going to keep it brief. I am going to give the quote and follow it up with from that point on I knew I wanted to make a difference in people's lives. I will then talk about my work/internship/life experiences that have lead me down this road. Then I am going to conclude with why _________ University is the perfect fit for me.
doublek1229   
Jan 16, 2011
Graduate / SOP for PhD in Planning: 2 technical questions and the article for your comments [4]

You have a lot of good information in this paper... Make sure you have it under the required number of words as some places can be extremely picky with this! I was always told if they want 500 words... write 490... if they want 1000 words... write 990. You always want to be right in the ball park. Good luck!
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