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Dec 22, 2010
Undergraduate / "engaging with present issues" - What appeals to me most - Columbia [3]

Constructive criticism much appreciated!

Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why: (1500 characters)

Columbia is the answering call to what I seek most in education. From the outset, Columbia sought to "enlarge the Mind, improve the Understanding, and polish the whole Man." It's an ambitious goal, but one I believe Columbia has absolutely achieved. Eighty undergraduate areas of study, five hundred clubs and organizations, a vibrant and diverse campus - what more can I ask for? Columbia offers the ideal milieu to explore my interests, whether that is fulfilling my love of creative writing by contributing to The Columbia Review, joining the intramural table tennis team, or singing A Capella with Notes and Keys.

What impresses me most, however, is the emphasis Columbia places on engaging with present issues. I believe education should encourage not only a love of learning, but also a willingness to improve society, to devise solutions for current problems. Columbia certainly champions this view of education. Located in the city of countless opportunities that is New York, Columbia actively partakes in research. The Audubon Biotechnology and Research Park especially impresses me, demonstrating Columbia's commitment to improving America and the wider world. This awareness of current issues also extends to the curriculum. I am excited by the Economics major, and its focus on current global matters such as globalization. ECON W2257y, the Global Economy, particularly interests me.

For me, education is the light of the future. In Columbia's dazzling light, the future is limitless.

If you want me to review your essays, I'll be very happy to as well :)
reynabeige   
Dec 31, 2010
Undergraduate / ("Princeton in the Nation's Service") How to Improve Princeton Supplement Essay? [30]

your essay is great - but as a sidepoint, what have you done to show that you're fighting hate?

But hate will wither when those who suffer silently speak up and demand respect, as I have.

you say this, but there's no concrete example of you doing so. the essay would be more credible if you provided some examples. assertions are all fine and dandy, but i think the AO would find a couple of examples just a little more convincing.

all the best!
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