Undergraduate / "returning to my life of academia" - Rochester curriculum 150 words [26]

You wrote "Science and math have always been my favorite subjects" and "explore my passion in these subjects"

Then you go on to say you desire to "explore all subjects of academia".

I would also change "At Rochester, I could witness the world's" to something like "At Rochester, I will witness the world's most powerful fusion laser in action and also be able to provide care at the university hospital."

Undergraduate / "returning to my life of academia" - Rochester curriculum 150 words [26]

I would forgo actually explaining why they're your favorite subjects. Instead perhaps "Science and math have always been my favorite subjects throughout my high school career "