Undergraduate / How did you learn about Lake Forest and why do you believe you are a good fit for our [5]

As I sat down flipping pages of the book "360 best colleges in the US", I met Lake Forest College. It suddenly caught all of my attention and in no time I started to uncover further about LFC. To my surprise one of my good friends is a freshman at LFC and talking to him gave me a good insight to the diversity and the num aspects of LFC. I thoroughly understand and have been drawn to the culture of this institution, the educational mission and especially the social setting of Lake Forest College and this interest would certainly help me make the best use of community. Coming from a UWC,I could contribute and adapt quickly to the spirits of LFC and to the student community.

I know its a pretty bad essay.But, any help would be appreciated.This is just the first draft.