Drinktea
Jan 22, 2011
Undergraduate / Economics, management, analyze a case, international student - UofT admission [5]
I'm an international student. Now I live in Canada, and this year I apply the University of Toronto.As many people konw, they need students to submit a SAF(many questions) includee some short essays.So I hope someone can check my essays, find my grammatical, punctuation errors, and give me some advices.Thank you very much. ;)
What is your favourite subject and why? (100 words or less)
Economics is my favorite subject among all the other subjects. Economics has a strong connection with our daily life. Basically, it is a very important subject because it helps me to analyze many human interactions happened while our world becoming more globalizationer. Also, it is a good subject that will help me to expand my understanding of the world. In addition, economics is closely connected with some subjects like business studies, politics which I am also interesting about. I think I will know more about economics if I go to university.
Why are you interested in this program? (100 words or less)
Management is interesting and challenging program. With this program, I can learn more about how people think and act in their workplace, thus, help me to becoming a outstanding business leader in the future. As we know, The world is becoming globalization, Management can assit me to discover more and more opporunites. I can make my life better and better, then I can help our society to devlop. And that why I want to go to university, it is the right place to help me learn more konwledge about this program.
What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
When I was studying in high-school , my teacher always tell me when you analyze a case about something happened in the world. You need to look all aspects of it , then you can judge it fairly, also you will understand more about it. If I want to become a outstanding people in this field, I need follow many rules, like if I have a meeting, I can't be late, be on time. Honesty and keep faith are also very important. That I learn from my parents. I will improve my skills and get more experiences in university.
Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less)
As an international student, English is my second language. When I came to Canada, I need talk with my teacher in English and write essays in English. At beginning, it is quite difficult, but with teahcers and friends's help, I overcome many troubles. When I communicate with others, I always follow my rule which is "Listen quickly and speak slowly", thus I can communicate more easily. When I write some essays, I need use foreigners thoughts not my navtie thoughts, because two cultures are different. I need develop this as time goes on.
I'm an international student. Now I live in Canada, and this year I apply the University of Toronto.As many people konw, they need students to submit a SAF(many questions) includee some short essays.So I hope someone can check my essays, find my grammatical, punctuation errors, and give me some advices.Thank you very much. ;)
What is your favourite subject and why? (100 words or less)
Economics is my favorite subject among all the other subjects. Economics has a strong connection with our daily life. Basically, it is a very important subject because it helps me to analyze many human interactions happened while our world becoming more globalizationer. Also, it is a good subject that will help me to expand my understanding of the world. In addition, economics is closely connected with some subjects like business studies, politics which I am also interesting about. I think I will know more about economics if I go to university.
Why are you interested in this program? (100 words or less)
Management is interesting and challenging program. With this program, I can learn more about how people think and act in their workplace, thus, help me to becoming a outstanding business leader in the future. As we know, The world is becoming globalization, Management can assit me to discover more and more opporunites. I can make my life better and better, then I can help our society to devlop. And that why I want to go to university, it is the right place to help me learn more konwledge about this program.
What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
When I was studying in high-school , my teacher always tell me when you analyze a case about something happened in the world. You need to look all aspects of it , then you can judge it fairly, also you will understand more about it. If I want to become a outstanding people in this field, I need follow many rules, like if I have a meeting, I can't be late, be on time. Honesty and keep faith are also very important. That I learn from my parents. I will improve my skills and get more experiences in university.
Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less)
As an international student, English is my second language. When I came to Canada, I need talk with my teacher in English and write essays in English. At beginning, it is quite difficult, but with teahcers and friends's help, I overcome many troubles. When I communicate with others, I always follow my rule which is "Listen quickly and speak slowly", thus I can communicate more easily. When I write some essays, I need use foreigners thoughts not my navtie thoughts, because two cultures are different. I need develop this as time goes on.