mydesigns
Feb 3, 2011
Graduate / "volunteering at my daughter's Xgrade class" - help with Statement of Purpose? [5]
Hi all,
English is not my first language and I need help with my SOP. Do we finish it with Best Regards, our name and info?
I'm planning to put my picture on top of the page so they know who wrote this ( I did met one proffesor ).
Also, please give your comment about my last paragraph of the letter and the closing statement.
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Over the past year, I have been volunteering at my daughter's Xgrade class to teach them how to think differently when they want to create something and express their ideas. I found their mind much more creative since they are not introduced to vary of limitations as we do. ( I simply put this because it is the only volunteery work that I have done )
In the light of XXX's ( university) reputation and history of excellence I believe that the MFA program in Advertising with electives in motion media design will enable me to channel my design creativity and marketing know-hows in the right direction. Subsequently, after earning my MFA, I would like to apply for a faculty position at a leading university, helping the next generation to achieve their goals in years to come.
I believe you will find my dedication to learn new ways to feed my creative mind very much outstanding. I hope that the admissions committee find my background and strengths to match XXX'S requirements. ( this is the end although I don't like it )
Thanks
mydesigns
Hi all,
English is not my first language and I need help with my SOP. Do we finish it with Best Regards, our name and info?
I'm planning to put my picture on top of the page so they know who wrote this ( I did met one proffesor ).
Also, please give your comment about my last paragraph of the letter and the closing statement.
....
Over the past year, I have been volunteering at my daughter's Xgrade class to teach them how to think differently when they want to create something and express their ideas. I found their mind much more creative since they are not introduced to vary of limitations as we do. ( I simply put this because it is the only volunteery work that I have done )
In the light of XXX's ( university) reputation and history of excellence I believe that the MFA program in Advertising with electives in motion media design will enable me to channel my design creativity and marketing know-hows in the right direction. Subsequently, after earning my MFA, I would like to apply for a faculty position at a leading university, helping the next generation to achieve their goals in years to come.
I believe you will find my dedication to learn new ways to feed my creative mind very much outstanding. I hope that the admissions committee find my background and strengths to match XXX'S requirements. ( this is the end although I don't like it )
Thanks
mydesigns
