Miss Pearl
Apr 3, 2011
Writing Feedback / The internet gives us a lot of information, someone thinks it might create problems. [4]
hi I am not a teacher but I think that you have some mistakes:
which help us to save more much time and more energy by finding them.
however, from my point of views view(not s)
And I think that you didn't write about problems. In my opinion in 1 body paragraph you should write about advantages and in 2 paragraph about problems
hi I am not a teacher but I think that you have some mistakes:
which help us to save more much time and more energy by finding them.
however, from my point of views view(not s)
And I think that you didn't write about problems. In my opinion in 1 body paragraph you should write about advantages and in 2 paragraph about problems