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Advantages and disadvantages of portable entertainment devices (MP3, DVD)


Miss Pearl 1 / 3  
Apr 3, 2011   #1
Portable entertainment devices, such as: Mp3 or DVD-players, which allow people to listen to music or watch films, are now commonplace. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, products of hi-tech like a Mp3 or DVD-players become to be parts of the humans' life. In my opinion, these technologies have merits and demerits.

People use these modern techniques everywhere and any time because they are portable, compact and may contain a lot of info compared with diskets or tape recording. For example, we can take Mp3 or DVD-players with us during the travelling or going to somewhere. And these devices don't claim more place than oldest. Moreover, we are able to record not only music or movies, but also educational programmes. These type of technologies have some opportunities. For instance, it can work without electricity and it is easy to handle. Besides, they have additional devices earphones in order not to distract other people.

On the other hand, Mp3 or DVD-players have some drawbacks. I mean, they cause sometimes incidents (stray off the environmental around). As an example, while crossing the street or driving transport facilities, which even be reason for an accident.

To sum up, I agree that today Mp3 or DVD-players play a great role in human's life. And these easy movable techniques have both advantages and disadvantages. However, I think that there are more merits than demerits.
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Apr 3, 2011   #2
Nowadays, products of hi-tech productslike asuch as Mp3 or DVD-players have become to bea parts of the humans' life. In my opinion, these technologies have merits and demerits.

People can use these modern techniques everywhere and at any time because they are portable, compact and may contain a lot of information compared withtoolder versions such as diskets or tape recordingers . For example, we can take Mp3 or DVD-players with us duringthewhile travelling or going to somewhere . And these devices don't claimrequiremoreplacemuch spacethan oldestas required by older portable entertainment devices .
OP Miss Pearl 1 / 3  
Apr 3, 2011   #3
thank you very much. I wish that moderators also checked my essay
Real Fog 5 / 26  
Apr 3, 2011   #4
On the other hand, Mp3 orand DVD-players have some drawbacks. I mean , they sometimes cause incidents (stray off the environmental around). As anFor example, while crossing the street or driving transport facilities, which evenat can be reason for an accident.

To sum up, I agree that today Mp3 or DVD-players play a great role in human's life. And these easy movable techniques have both advantages and disadvantages. However, I think that there are more merits than demerits (give an evidence)
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Apr 4, 2011   #5
Nowadays, hi-tech products like Mp3 players or DVD-players have become common parts of human life. ---I made some changes. I also made it so that "human" is used as an adjective. It is not wrong the way you did it, but this change makes it sound nicer.

You can always just say "going somewhere" and not going to somewhere.
For example, we can take Mp3 or DVD-players with us during the travelling or going to somewhere. A

As an example, while crossing the street or driving, transport facilities, which these products may even become the causes of an accident.

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OP Miss Pearl 1 / 3  
Apr 6, 2011   #6
thank you vary much! I think that your advices will help in my exam test

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