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Troi   
May 20, 2011
Scholarship / "To develop my aptitudes and improve on them" - Why do I deserve the scholarship [6]

the scholraship application states
"Prepare an essay that will convince the selection panel that you deserve to receive scholarship for
your studies at American University in Kosovo. Remember that this is a competitive process."

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To whom it may concern,

There are many good reasons to argue why I deserve this scholarship. I am a hard working and motivated individual with clear goals. I will make the best use of this scholarship to succeed in garnering a vast array of knowledge and endeavor to become a beacon of enlightenment with the aid of the reputation of AUK. Perhaps the strongest reason to my candidacy for this scholarship is my impressive outcome with regards to the achievements in various academic competitions I participated in and the development of my cognitive abilities which would be further expanded with the help of AUK.

With a high school diploma focused in Mathematics and Informatics, I expect that the Undergraduate program will contribute enormously to my future career plans. I am confident that, having my heart set on following this program, I will be able to absorb every new concept that is presented to me and also quickly adapt to the educational system of AUK. Moreover, I believe that the experience of studying in a multi-cultural environment would help me to further develop myself, as well as allow me to gain valuable cultural and social knowledge. I welcome challenges, I am able and extremely motivated. Furthermore, what I consider the impetus and the driving force of my future academic career is my ability and willingness to share my vast to-be-gained experience and knowledge with individuals across Kosovo.

I am a sociable person, I enjoy working in teams and I believe that my individual abilities are best put into use within a team. My teamwork experience includes many curricular and extracurricular activities which I attended or volunteered, including sports events, school festivals and competitions. Working in teams has made me a flexible person, who knows how to listen to the opinions of others and how to express myself. As a result, others are able to better understand my intentions and ideas.

Therefore, my goal is to develop my aptitudes and improve on them to a certain degree that would allow me to better understand the subtleties of the educational system under which the AUK operates. I would very much like to achieve this through the aid of your scholarship.

In conclusion, I can confidently say that I would be a valuable addition to your program.

Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Troi   
May 21, 2011
Scholarship / "To develop my aptitudes and improve on them" - Why do I deserve the scholarship [6]

Yeah i think i should write it from scratch too.. my essay has nothing personal in t, whereas In all websites that offered tiPs on this topic stated that u should share a slice of life..but i dont have any achievments in high school nor did i participate on any school or other interesting activities..
Troi   
May 21, 2011
Scholarship / "To develop my aptitudes and improve on them" - Why do I deserve the scholarship [6]

Thank you so much for the tips, although i think theres not a word limit or anything like that a friend of mine wfote around 900 words another friend wrote around 300 and they both got the scholarship , What do you think of my essay should i start from scratch , maybe use some of the sentences of this essay on the new one , or just add some personal statements to the essay?

Sorry for the poor writing ,im postin through my cell so its kinda hard
Thanks again
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