Writing Feedback / essay about myself, when/where I was born, my study, hobbies, etc. [2]

In this essay, I am going to talk about myself in these ideas, When and where did I born, my study and my aim, and my hobbies favorite kind of music.

First of all, I have born in Riyadh the capital city of Saudi Arabia in 1989. My big family from Suder, it's a town in north of Riyadh. Now I live with my family I have three brothers, and one sister. I am the baggiest one.

Secondly, I am in the second year in the college and I hope I complete. My aim is to be a manger in my father's company because of that I decided to be in Biasness College.

Last but not least, my hobbies are playing football, and basketball, also I like the internet and hang out with my friends. My favorite kind or genres of music are Rock, Pop, Rap, and Hip Hop.

To conclude, I am one if I like something I got it, if I cant I just dream about it and hope to have it some time. I am not that much I am very easy and clear my heart is always open.

thank you from now