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alicialenette   
Jul 24, 2011
Graduate / healthcare provider with training in various subspecialties-PA school narrative essay [5]

"One? Two? Which lens is better as we compare, lens one or lens two?", the Optometrist asked me. The choice I had to make was not such an easy one while hearing the distracting sounds of cash registers beeping in the background of my local Walmart's eyecare center. At this moment, my mother trusted me to be truthful and compliant. Did I possibly have the power to sway the results of my eye exam in my favor? I really wanted some glasses. My decision making abilities were hindered. "Which lens was better?", I asked myself. All I could think about was how impressive his clinical skills were. I wanted to understand what he was doing when he asked me, "One or two?" Looking back, I now realize it was at this moment at the age of thirteen that I became enlightened about the many opportunities available in the medical field.

Before this moment, I thought the medical field only consisted of surgeons, pediatricians, and nurses. However, I began to pursue my interest in becoming some sort of healthcare provider. Upon researching career options, I discovered physician assistant medicine on a satisfactory career option list. I learned that a physician assistant works under a medical doctor as an extension of primary healthcare in multiple medical settings. Their career training levels varied from bachelor's degree to master's degree, a plus; knowing I wanted to obtain healthcare training in a shorter amount of time than what was offered in medical school. So, I kept this choice in the back of my mind. I thought I wanted to be an Optometrist, but after working as a medical assistant for an Ophthalmolgist I became attracted to the medical side of eyecare. This included the preoperative and postoperative aspects of patient care. Yet, my abilities were limited as a medical assistant. This led me to shadow various physician assistants; I desire to become a physician assistant indefinitely. My motivations towards becoming a physician assistant are based on the desire to practice medicine with autonomy amongst a medical team in various healthcare sectors in order to serve at the highest level of patient care.

If seeing is believing, then shadowing has been a catalyst for my motivations. I observed the conflict of surgeons and doctors having massive work loads engendered by their large patient base. This created a need for more medically trained practitioners with hopes of reaching patients who would otherwise be on long waiting lists or delayed appointment schedules. These physician assistants were very busy. If there was a medical problem that was observed during the examinations, the physician assistant had the jurisdiction to provide treatment in addition to gaining insight from a supervising physician who would be contacted via cell phone or email. The patients medical problem would be addressed efficiently. This self governing aspect of this career is very attractive to me. Yet, I love the fact that physician assistants discuss medical findings with their supervising physicians in order to maximize patient care.

Fortunately, I have been able to shadow many physican assistants in transplant centers, sports medicine clinics, pediatric orthopaedic clinics, and operating rooms. The physician assistant mentor list for my state covers almost every subspecialty of medicine, even Ophthalmology. I am motivated by the fact that once my medical training is complete if a change of subspecialty is desired, it is possible to switch to a sector of greater need such as the Primary Care sector.

I am excited about finishing my pursuit of physician assistant medical training which will allow me to fulfill my desire to become an excellent healthcare provider with training in various subspecialties in order to diagnose, treat, and educate patients about medical decisions reviewed by an integral medical team of which I will be apart.
alicialenette   
Jul 24, 2011
Graduate / Fracturing my C7 spinous led me to verify my decision to become a Physician Assistant (PA) [8]

Very good essay. Gives great insight on what inspired you to pursue this career goal. It also gives a clear explanation of your view of what a PA does. (important). Great story line... I don't think there are many changes to be made. Just make sure you are within the character limit.

Alicia. (Future PA)

Check out my essay... See what you think.

Thanks.
alicialenette   
Jul 26, 2011
Graduate / healthcare provider with training in various subspecialties-PA school narrative essay [5]

Thanks for the feedback. This is such a hard essay to write. You know how you know what you want to say, but you want the words to fit the emotion. Huh, well I'll keep revising.

I am applying to Emory, Medical College of GA, Mercer University, South University, South Carolina, Jacksonville-NOVA, and maybe Barry (Virgin Islands) PCOM, Salus, Chatham, Duke, NC Wingate, San Antonio... I don't know... I will apply to as many schools as my money will allow. I have to get in 2012.
alicialenette   
Jul 26, 2011
Graduate / Costa Rica: Narrative for Physician's Assistant School: (explain motivations) [3]

I think your essay is great! It gives a lot of insight on who you are and what your ambitions are...

I would just re-read the essay to make sure all the grammar is correct.
I think there were some run on (looking sentences).
Overall, I get the impression that you want to become a physician assistant because of your love for medicine and the confirmed idea that many are not fortunate enough to have access. But, you slightly touch on what you hope your role will be as a PA. I am still not clear what truly motivates you? Is it the traveling or is it the hopes you have for addressing the healthcare issues in lower income areas? Or is it both of these things?

So that's my take on it. Hope this helps...

Good luck.
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