Writing Feedback / Friendship-We will never apart! [3]

When I was wrote writing this, the Earth was drizzle drizzling by the rain. Fresh smell of ground that mixed up with the grass was so peaceful and tranquilize me who was just came back from tuition class. This mildness and bliss was bringing me down to memory lane. Which , which is very nostalgic.

Your story is quite impressing, but the are little mistiakes in grammer.

Writing Feedback / Greece - which country would you visit if you have 2 weeks free time? [3]

There are many countries which I have them in my mind to visit them I have in my mind to vist. Enjoying free time and relaxing being relaxed are the main factors that impress a person to see a foreign country, so if I have had a chance to become free for two weeks have two days off, I will would go to see Greece. Greece is my first priority to visitVisiting Greece is my first priority due to some reasons: I love it's climate and visual places.

Hope it will help u.
ps I really don't know what visual places mean.