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Sep 12, 2011
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Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children . agree or disagree ?
The issue whether teaching children remains uncontroverial dispute. Some pp believe that firm discipline provides kids easier access to hebave as it should be . While other claim that this decision is not perfect . I don't totally agree with this firm discipline .
First , it is argued that children will bring up these good characteristics with girid punishments can children have pressure to remember deeply , like being on time , doing exercises , respecting their teachers . However , the sad truth is that os afraid of firm discipline do they gradually errors , therefore, as a result of self-unconfident. In some cases ,Kids who were born and grow up with strict punishments have a high trend to be the habit of aping the adults to the next-generation or being stressed . Others said that this education method has negative effect to children .
the second benefit of firm discipline helps kids stay away from evils in society .It is possible that at the age of puberty which is rebel age and big-ego, children can be attracted to bad action without determined advises or parents' punishments . However the likelihood is that only in their family do children need unconditional love more than parents' cane . The facts have shown that as a result of not being loved by parents , even driving away , one of them lost their direction in behaviour and naively believe that bad friends like their comrades .
only by this education do children are violated children's rights . In other word nowhere were child attacted by both civil society and serious children violation than in education !
i need recomments' every one . THANKS ALOT ! ^^
Firm discipline is a necessary part of teaching children . agree or disagree ?
The issue whether teaching children remains uncontroverial dispute. Some pp believe that firm discipline provides kids easier access to hebave as it should be . While other claim that this decision is not perfect . I don't totally agree with this firm discipline .
First , it is argued that children will bring up these good characteristics with girid punishments can children have pressure to remember deeply , like being on time , doing exercises , respecting their teachers . However , the sad truth is that os afraid of firm discipline do they gradually errors , therefore, as a result of self-unconfident. In some cases ,Kids who were born and grow up with strict punishments have a high trend to be the habit of aping the adults to the next-generation or being stressed . Others said that this education method has negative effect to children .
the second benefit of firm discipline helps kids stay away from evils in society .It is possible that at the age of puberty which is rebel age and big-ego, children can be attracted to bad action without determined advises or parents' punishments . However the likelihood is that only in their family do children need unconditional love more than parents' cane . The facts have shown that as a result of not being loved by parents , even driving away , one of them lost their direction in behaviour and naively believe that bad friends like their comrades .
only by this education do children are violated children's rights . In other word nowhere were child attacted by both civil society and serious children violation than in education !
i need recomments' every one . THANKS ALOT ! ^^