Writing Feedback / How can we inculcate the love for one's country? [2]

Your essay is well structured; every paragraph you start with firstly, secondly and nutshell. Therefore, you have given me an idea of writing a good structure essay, i also noticed you used a lot of big words in your essays like inculcate, lackluster and so for. i can see you good with vocabularies but sometimes using simple words makes your essay more straight forward.

All the best.