Undergraduate / Writing about my learning disability - Is it a good direction for personal statement? [3]

hi.I just registered ,I m really bad at writing especially an essay.please help me to improve my writing skills.I am confidant that i wrote this sentence wrong in any way.in the future ,I will always write my essay and short sentences .whatever i write it good or bad .please proofread or revise it for me .thank you all.

Graduate / Statement of Intent to Graduate Linguistics Program at University of Chicago [3]

I am really wondered at an essay that you wrote ,You are good at writing .In fact I am not good at writing essay and grammatical structure.I have just joined this site,I am glad to found EssayForum.

Writing Feedback / 'people have to work and experience new things' - When people succeed [4]

Hi. I agree with your ideas,But there is one line that I do not understand ,Perhaps you could change the structure .

when we see the result of exams there are some students that have grate mark toward the students than have extensive reading,

In fact ,You are better than me .Good luck

Undergraduate / "whatever decision I make with my co-members" - extracurricular activities or work [21]

I think you took enough revise for your essay.Sorry but I can not help you because I am not good enough .