sushigurl
Oct 7, 2011
Undergraduate / Cultural Diffusion: spirit and culture - Rutgers Essay [3]
Growing up as a second generation immigrant in this large melting pot, Iwasam exposed to many different ethnicities and cultures.
This desire of mine to accustom my American friends with the Indian culture, then extended to an idea which would impact my community as a whole. My idea was to introduce Hindi, my native language, as a foreign language in my school district. First, I contacted the president of the Bridgewater-Raritan Board of Educationpresident , Mr. Arvind Mathur, who also happened to be an Indian.
The general idea is great and good job on your achievement~ I think you should develop your conclusion though, seems weak still. I would also suggest that for more details, maybe explain the impact/affect of creating Hindi Now, positive feedback perhaps?
Growing up as a second generation immigrant in this large melting pot, I
This desire of mine to accustom my American friends with the Indian culture, then extended to an idea which would impact my community as a whole. My idea was to introduce Hindi, my native language, as a foreign language in my school district. First, I contacted the president of the Bridgewater-Raritan Board of Education
The general idea is great and good job on your achievement~ I think you should develop your conclusion though, seems weak still. I would also suggest that for more details, maybe explain the impact/affect of creating Hindi Now, positive feedback perhaps?