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Posts by TJarjour
Joined: Nov 5, 2011
Last Post: Nov 26, 2011
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TJarjour   
Nov 26, 2011
Undergraduate / 'ASB President' - extracurricular activities or work experience [2]

As ASB President, I have taken on the duties of leading a school and the student body cabinet. I work with 18 other cabinet members together making up the ASB cabinet. Last year, I served as the Publicity Commissioner, which gave me a year of experience. This experience has helped me greatly because similar to last year, our ASB advisor has left us on maternity leave. This has proven to be a challenge because I'm also constantly trying to fill the shoes of our away advisor. I am learning how difficult it really is to control eighteen other students, who are also my friends. Yet personally I feel that I've been getting better and learning everyday what it takes to be a good leader. As stressful as this job has been, I love it because I learn more and more everyday of what I am truly capable of.
TJarjour   
Nov 26, 2011
Undergraduate / 'My Dad's Illness Gave Me Inspiration' - UC Prompt #1 [25]

How has this affected you tho? Provide more detail for that but otherwise it was really deep. Best of luck in your essay as well as dealing with your dad.

The only other suggestion I had is that you should give it a little bit more meaning as to what it really means.
TJarjour   
Nov 26, 2011
Undergraduate / First Day of high school; UC - EXPERIENCE [7]

Wow that was really good but this is from your Freshmen year, just a thought if it should be about something more recent?
Overall I think it was a good essay though, great job and best of luck!
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