Writing Feedback / 'I first met shir'- help in Describing a person .. [3]

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I first met shir when I start a new school .she has a brown eyes and smiles that make you smile! .she is friendly girl that will never let you down who always understand and listen to your problems. Shir is kind of person that love to help to people. I think if was more people in the world that have the same qualities like her the world will be a better place