Undergraduate / UC Essay My 1966 Mustang [6]

"Also every time I get behind the wheel of my car I feel like I am driving in a Fast and Furious movie." i also think you should delete that. Um how many words is this?

"He said he my brother got hit by a car we wanted to see it. He told my brother "Don't stop, keep going." Don't stop, keep going is exactly how I had to treat driving." I feel like a lot of your sentences are repetitive... try using different words? and what do you mean by "he my brother got hit by a car?"

Undergraduate / 'I want designing' - USC Freshman: Engineering [4]

for the second prompt you didn't reallly answer the question of why you would embrace/reject that stereotype. I'm thiking you will be leaning more towards the reject? if so talk about the most important aspects of engineering and things like creativity and other qualities