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Dec 31, 2011
Undergraduate / 'sophomore class presidents' - student government short answer common app [3]

hey, any feedback would be greatly appreciated :) thank you!!!

the underscored parts are names by the way. first one is my name, and second is my co-president.

SHORT ANSWER:

Standing by the loudspeaker, I eagerly anticipated the results. Countless pessimistic thoughts raced through my mind as I tried to envision the different possibilities this announcement could entail. The intercom roared, "This year's sophomore class presidents will be _______ and _______" This statement echoed in my mind hundreds of times during that moment. That was it. The moment that I was yearning for weeks finally came. Since then, I have been elected as the class co-president for a total of three consecutive years where I've organized dozens of school events, created a school store, and best of all, shared my passion for leadership with others. My leadership abilities have prospered and I have become much more confident overall. Being a leader has transformed me into a completely different person with more confidence and skills that I will need for college as well as life.
imbluedaba1229   
Dec 31, 2011
Undergraduate / 'the local community garden' - CommonApp Extracurricular Activity [6]

I agree with the first poster. Maybe you could discuss how you've changed due to this experience with another sentence? Otherwise this is great! Please check my short answer as welll, it would be greatly appreciated :]
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