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Mar 18, 2012
Undergraduate / "I am Vietnamese" - My UWC admission essay [16]
Hello,
I'm Currently working on my UWC admission essay and this is the fisrt time I've applied for a schorlarship so there ay be many mistakes. This is my essay:
Topic: Please write a statement of not more than 300 words explaining why you are interested in attending a United World College, describing both what you might contribute to the College and what you hope to gain.Since I was a little boy, I have always had a burning desire to do something great - being an ambassador. I want to go abroad, meet friends from all over the world and show them how beautiful my country is. And when I heard about UWC two years ago, I knew that my chance was coming.
To me, UWC is the place where my dream comes true. UWC has an excellent academic standard as well as a friendly multicultural environment. In UWC, I will not only be provided with important knowledge but also improve my social, teaming and leadership skills, which is essential for me to follow the way that I have chosen.
At UWC, I hope to be an active contributor to the school. As a student, I will take my education seriously while getting on well with other students regardless of countries, races or colors. As a Vietnamese, I will tell other students about my country, its heroic history and how lucky we are to live in such a peaceful world. I, together with my friends, will make UWC a big family for every student, a desirable place for anyone the first time they think of "going abroad".
After my wonderful years in UWC, I will become a knowledgeable young man who can help not only myself but also take part in developing my country. I want to become an ambassador of Viet Nam who can bring its images to the rest of the world, where it is still unknown. I want that one day, when anyone says that "I am Vietnamese", people will look up to them with a sign of admiration.
Like my grandfather has always told me, "Man becomes what he thinks about", just give me a chance and you will never regret about it.
Total: 300 words
Please help me!!!
Hello,
I'm Currently working on my UWC admission essay and this is the fisrt time I've applied for a schorlarship so there ay be many mistakes. This is my essay:
Topic: Please write a statement of not more than 300 words explaining why you are interested in attending a United World College, describing both what you might contribute to the College and what you hope to gain.Since I was a little boy, I have always had a burning desire to do something great - being an ambassador. I want to go abroad, meet friends from all over the world and show them how beautiful my country is. And when I heard about UWC two years ago, I knew that my chance was coming.
To me, UWC is the place where my dream comes true. UWC has an excellent academic standard as well as a friendly multicultural environment. In UWC, I will not only be provided with important knowledge but also improve my social, teaming and leadership skills, which is essential for me to follow the way that I have chosen.
At UWC, I hope to be an active contributor to the school. As a student, I will take my education seriously while getting on well with other students regardless of countries, races or colors. As a Vietnamese, I will tell other students about my country, its heroic history and how lucky we are to live in such a peaceful world. I, together with my friends, will make UWC a big family for every student, a desirable place for anyone the first time they think of "going abroad".
After my wonderful years in UWC, I will become a knowledgeable young man who can help not only myself but also take part in developing my country. I want to become an ambassador of Viet Nam who can bring its images to the rest of the world, where it is still unknown. I want that one day, when anyone says that "I am Vietnamese", people will look up to them with a sign of admiration.
Like my grandfather has always told me, "Man becomes what he thinks about", just give me a chance and you will never regret about it.
Total: 300 words
Please help me!!!