Book Reports / Greasy Lake Setting Essay - Improvements? [2]

Did not get the grade I wanted on this essay. Was hoping to get some good feedback for improvements I can make. Thanks in advance!

I have attached my Essay (Setting, A Great Example.docx) and the assignment (Essay2 (3).docx)

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