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Mar 24, 2012
Scholarship / 'I'm Bulgarian' - 3 unique Factors that shape my personality [5]

List and describe three unique factors that have most shaped who you are (any obstacles you have faced or passions you have developed are especially relevant). 100 word limit per factor. *

Okay so this is the topic.

And I need help with one of the factors.
I'm thinking of putting the fact that I am Bulgarian and that shaped the way I think and the different heritage taught be different life values.

And also I'm thinking of putting Lady Gaga...

That is the thing I'm most concerned about. Because it doesn't seem very professional to put that on a scholarship essay. And I wouldn't do it if she really didn't shape who I am today. She empowered me and gave me the strength to stand up for myself and be confident.

So what do you think? Pls help.

Thanks. :)
koolbeans11   
Mar 24, 2012
Book Reports / Writing a monologue for "John Proctor" in Arthur Miller's 'The Crucible' [5]

Like any other man, John Proctor wants freedom. But he isn't like any other man because he was willing to sacrifice himself for justice.

He has a strong and determined personality, but in the 3 months he was in jail, he felt hopeless at times.
I would talk about this in the monologue:
- About how much he loves Elizabeth and wants to continue spending his life with her
- About how unjust the court and the Puritans are
- Mention the anger he feels towards Abigail and the other girls. Line you could use: "The court is raising up a WHORE!" (it was in the book in reference to Abigail)

- Debating whether to confess or die.

So, clearly there are a lot of things that could be going through John Proctor's mind.
As for the props, make him wear raggedy clothes since he was in jail. And make the voice sound weak.

That's all I can think of! I hope you do well! :)
koolbeans11   
Mar 25, 2012
Scholarship / 'I'm Bulgarian' - 3 unique Factors that shape my personality [5]

Is this OK?

Through her foundation that is dedicated to youth empowerment and the awareness of discrimination and violence, Lady Gaga has given me the strength to be brave enough to stand up against cruelty and hatred in the world. It started through the confidence that her inspiring music gave to young people who do not feel accepted in their communities. It has encouraged me to be a more aware person, more self-confident, and open-minded. It gives me another purpose to go to school-for the protection against bullying and discrimination as well as to inspire others to be more accepting, tolerant, and kind.

The factor is The Born This Way Foundation.
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