Maite
Mar 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / Having long hair - Essay - Feedback [2]
Having long hair.
Every time I go to the hairdresser, I want to kill the barber. I love my long hair and I only want to cut my hairs tips and he always cut too much. Why I love my long hair?
Some advantages of having long hair lie in the ease in you can change your look, you can wear your hair picked up to create multiple hairstyles, or if you want it loose , straightening is perfect for a party, also a unkempt look make us see more natural and men love it.
On the other hand when it is too hot in order to be more fresh you have to keep it up off the neck in a ponytail for example, furthermore the humidity it is a problem if you have curly hair because it tend to pump up. Another thing to take into account it is that long hair requires good washing in order to keep it healthy. In my case the worst problem is the wind, because en Rio Gallegos it blows very hard, so I have to fix and brush my hair all the time.
Having long hair is a matter of choice, it has their advantages and disadvantages but in my case I think it gives you lots of options on what you want to do with it, from wavy to curly to straightened hair.
Assignment's prompts:
*Essay of any topic
*200 houndred words
*Grammar correction
Having long hair.
Every time I go to the hairdresser, I want to kill the barber. I love my long hair and I only want to cut my hairs tips and he always cut too much. Why I love my long hair?
Some advantages of having long hair lie in the ease in you can change your look, you can wear your hair picked up to create multiple hairstyles, or if you want it loose , straightening is perfect for a party, also a unkempt look make us see more natural and men love it.
On the other hand when it is too hot in order to be more fresh you have to keep it up off the neck in a ponytail for example, furthermore the humidity it is a problem if you have curly hair because it tend to pump up. Another thing to take into account it is that long hair requires good washing in order to keep it healthy. In my case the worst problem is the wind, because en Rio Gallegos it blows very hard, so I have to fix and brush my hair all the time.
Having long hair is a matter of choice, it has their advantages and disadvantages but in my case I think it gives you lots of options on what you want to do with it, from wavy to curly to straightened hair.
Assignment's prompts:
*Essay of any topic
*200 houndred words
*Grammar correction