Writing Feedback / Playing Outdoor Sports - Essay - Help [3]

Nowdays , People Say Playing Outdoor Sports Is Healthy And IT is more enjoyable. During Weekend , I play outdoor activities as Modern Life is so busy that I Have To Concentrate my studies . Playing On Weekend , Make Me make new Friends and get in touch with older friends. Playing outdoor sports is important as it keep us healthy and active

I Usually Sports Like Soccer On Weekend . We Usually Play So .
I Play Soccer Because
I soccer At A Big Field Near My House . I Play With My School Friends

I Play Soccer because I Play This Sports Since Young age And I Like Playing Soccer . It Help Me Strengthen Bonding With My Friends . Playing Soccer Keeps Me Fit, keeping me fit. Some Of My Friends Play Computer Games , They Do Not Know The Importance OF Playing Outdoor Sports . Playing Outdoor Sports Make Me Channel My Anger Like Kicking The Ball Or Shooting The Ball .

I used To Play Soccer For Competition Like Police Youth Programme , Inter-Class Competition . Playing On Team Makes Me Proud And feel A Sense Of Belonging .

Playing Soccer Make ME Create New Friends , Meeting Old Friends And Making Enemies Into Good Friends . Like My Classmate Before , Cornelius Used To Bully Me , After The Captain Asked Me To Partner Play With Him , There Was Obstacles , But Now We Are Best Buddy .

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