Undergraduate / about me - There are certain things that I care a lot about. [3]

1. Most importantly, they have never coerced me into doing anything I don't want

I think 'Most importantly, they have never coerced me into doing anything' is enough.
If you are coerced to do something, that means you were not willing to do that, so just delete 'I don't want'.

2. And you mentioned about your concerts for thousands of people. I think you'd better elaborate your feeling when you performance before large number of audience. That would be an unique experience.

Best wishes~~

Student Talk / Application Question January [127]

If you submit it before the deadline, that would be ok. Don't worry at all.