rachelk16
May 19, 2012
Letters / 'reconsider my admission term' - international student's appeal letter (grammar). [4]
Dear Admission Committee:
My name is __, an accepted transfer student for spring'13. I am writing a letter of appeal to reconsider my entering term of admission.
As I understand many spring admitted student appealed for fall admission, I am a bit afraid that I bother admissions committee. Even though I was thinking to just enter College Name in spring'13, my desire to attend ___ led me to write this letter. As I am already 21, I don't want to graduate too late. I considered to attend my current institution for the next semester because of that, but I decided not to do because I want to spend my whole three years at____. When I went to college visit last month, the student campus guide told me that students take their study abroad program during summer because they really love to be in __. Due to that, I became more eager to study in __ as soon as possible rather than traveling and working in my hometown.
Other than my desire and love for the school, I have some personal reasons too. My best friend from the same hometown would attend ___ next year, and we always talked about how great it would be if we can enjoy college and campus life together. I don't want to miss this time for the next semester. I also believe that being with my friend would help me to adapt into___ more quickly.
Also, when I looked up the schedule for my future academic scheduling, I found out that there are year courses which I cannot take from spring semester. In this case, I have to wait until junior year to take Chinese until my junior year(planning on double major with Chinese and Economics). I can take it during summer or winter, but I am trying to all the courses required for my major at ___.
Though I can make an valuable time for myself outside ____, I really want to spend next semester at ____ more than any other things. Please consider about my huge motivation and passion for ___ and I would like to ask you to reconsider my admission term and thank you for your time.
Dear Admission Committee:
My name is __, an accepted transfer student for spring'13. I am writing a letter of appeal to reconsider my entering term of admission.
As I understand many spring admitted student appealed for fall admission, I am a bit afraid that I bother admissions committee. Even though I was thinking to just enter College Name in spring'13, my desire to attend ___ led me to write this letter. As I am already 21, I don't want to graduate too late. I considered to attend my current institution for the next semester because of that, but I decided not to do because I want to spend my whole three years at____. When I went to college visit last month, the student campus guide told me that students take their study abroad program during summer because they really love to be in __. Due to that, I became more eager to study in __ as soon as possible rather than traveling and working in my hometown.
Other than my desire and love for the school, I have some personal reasons too. My best friend from the same hometown would attend ___ next year, and we always talked about how great it would be if we can enjoy college and campus life together. I don't want to miss this time for the next semester. I also believe that being with my friend would help me to adapt into___ more quickly.
Also, when I looked up the schedule for my future academic scheduling, I found out that there are year courses which I cannot take from spring semester. In this case, I have to wait until junior year to take Chinese until my junior year(planning on double major with Chinese and Economics). I can take it during summer or winter, but I am trying to all the courses required for my major at ___.
Though I can make an valuable time for myself outside ____, I really want to spend next semester at ____ more than any other things. Please consider about my huge motivation and passion for ___ and I would like to ask you to reconsider my admission term and thank you for your time.