Dear Admission Committee:
My name is __, an accepted transfer student for spring'13. I am writing a letter of appeal to reconsider my entering term of admission.
As I understand many spring admitted student appealed for fall admission, I am a bit afraid that I bother admissions committee. Even though I was thinking to just enter College Name in spring'13, my desire to attend ___ led me to write this letter. As I am already 21, I don't want to graduate too late. I considered to attend my current institution for the next semester because of that, but I decided not to do because I want to spend my whole three years at____. When I went to college visit last month, the student campus guide told me that students take their study abroad program during summer because they really love to be in __. Due to that, I became more eager to study in __ as soon as possible rather than traveling and working in my hometown.
Other than my desire and love for the school, I have some personal reasons too. My best friend from the same hometown would attend ___ next year, and we always talked about how great it would be if we can enjoy college and campus life together. I don't want to miss this time for the next semester. I also believe that being with my friend would help me to adapt into___ more quickly.
Also, when I looked up the schedule for my future academic scheduling, I found out that there are year courses which I cannot take from spring semester. In this case, I have to wait until junior year to take Chinese until my junior year(planning on double major with Chinese and Economics). I can take it during summer or winter, but I am trying to all the courses required for my major at ___.
Though I can make an valuable time for myself outside ____, I really want to spend next semester at ____ more than any other things. Please consider about my huge motivation and passion for ___ and I would like to ask you to reconsider my admission term and thank you for your time.
I believe this is a good letter, I cannot see any apparent mistakes. Just send it out. Do not worry too much.
As I understand many spring admitted student appealed for fall admission, I am a bit afraid that I bother admissions committee
I wouldn't put it that way. You do not bother them, you just want them to do their job. Something like "I apologise for occupying your time, but..." should be sufficient.
Please consider about my huge motivation and passion for ___ and I would like to ask you to reconsider my admission term and thank you for your time.
This should be a separate sentence.
Hope it helps.
Good reason.
It could be better if you make below sentence more concisely.
I considered to attend my current institution for the next semester because of that, but I decided not to do because I want to spend my whole three years at____.
-> I considered to attend my current institute for the next semester, however, I decided not to do since I thought it is better to spend my whole three years at~~.
It is just my opinion.
Never mind.
