Speeches / 'Tom Robinsons trail' - speach [3]

Instead of just saying "this is good" I am going to trying and give you some positive criticism to help you with your speech. To start of I think you need to reword your introduction a little bit, you don't really " introduce" he topic, and it doesn't really catch the readers attention. I like how you end your speech.

Writing Feedback / IELTS importance of co-operation rather than competition in children's education [5]

In your last paragraph don't use "in conclusion," that is way too generic, and is considered by many teachers to be unprofessional. Also it should say " to have the ability" in your last paragraph.