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Posts by varun1960
Joined: May 22, 2012
Last Post: May 25, 2012
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varun1960   
May 22, 2012
Writing Feedback / People relying more on technology to solve problems is not a negative trend [3]

Technology keep on increasing day to day at the same time people rely more and more on it. Relying on technology doesn't mean people are unable to think on their own or solve their problems independently. I believe the ability of people to think on themselves doesn't get deteriorated for the following reasons.

Firstly, people are passionate in using new technologies and inventing new sources of technology. People change the sources of technologies and keep on upgrading them in order to move on with latest trend and fast moving society. If man is unable to think on his own he may not be able to use new sources of technology. People thinking on their own and started developing lots of applications. For example Charles Babbage invented computer, his ability doesn't get deteriorated using an adding machine so called calculator.

Further people started relying on their own due to short of time and made them comfortable, today the human relations got elaborated than we have in past. One can't suppose be able to memorize all the contacts and get confused so he make use of telephone directory to make it simple. People find the new ways to solve the problem and increase their ability to think in developing new ways.

Relying on the technology increased due to time factor and fast moving society. Use of technology made most of people to think innovative and increased the one's capability to think in learning the usage of new technologies, but it never deteriorate one's capability to think own or solve independently.
varun1960   
May 23, 2012
Writing Feedback / Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle [3]

Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle and their relationship with each other. I believe that studying major cities doesn't make sense in analyzing the important characteristics of a society. Major cities alone can't help in understanding the structure of the society and hardly any clear idea is achieved.

Most of the cities are formed by people of various cultures and different people come from various hamlets and towns, they have different reasons to live there. No static culture is maintained all the time; it keeps on changing with time and the opportunities. Human relationships change day to day life. For instance a person or family who used to live in a village who started life in a city may not be able to spend the time with their relations as if before. Here the human relationships are estimated wrong observing city life.

Whole society can't be estimated or analyzed studying a part of it. Here I come up with another example, people in New York hardly spent their time for having their food and the people in London who belongs to same western part of the world have their food with peace. Here the lifestyle of the western societies can't be understood clearly. No one can get the pristine sense of statement studying the major cities.

Characteristics of the society include lot of things; simple the study of cities that keep on changing and which are dependent on many circumstances can't bring up any particular idea. Definitely one can't get the clear sense of culture and human relations in society by studying a part of the society or the major cities of the society.
varun1960   
May 25, 2012
Writing Feedback / Society represents the different characteristics of human lifestyle [3]

yeah. . i mean saying that people not even spending much time to have food. thanx Susan for pointing out errors .. . but i can't get u clearly all the mistakes u highlighted. if possible please explain. thanx once again for spending time for my essay :)
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