Writing Feedback / 'equally in every subject' - univerities to accept equal numbers of males and females [3]

"Education is the right of every student". Though this is a known fact, the girls are not still allowed to join certain groups of subjects in education. However, in many aspects it is proved that girls can do it better than boys.

To begin with in the present world, women are competing with men in every aspect. They have proved their ability that with hardwork and dedication they can reach a career high, for instance; if they were the women, they can not be lawyers in the past. In the reality, this thought was washed out when a women became the Supreme Court Judge. So, education can shine the stones in the jems if given opportunity.

i can just rewrite some sentences; however, i not sure that right :)