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jeziker   
Dec 28, 2008
Undergraduate / My Seventh Continent. Commonapp essay showing that I am suicidal? [10]

ok. im writing on a movie in which everyone ended up committing suicide and how this movie affects my life

im saying how i saw the characters in the movie in monotonous pursuit of meaningless achievement (money) ...and i say how i kidna felt the same as my life is quite repetitive and my life was only aiming for good grades. i got used to this way of living that i was quite oblivious to the real world which i believe is anything but insipid.

but instead of killing myself :o, i took action. i changed my learning environment and tried to get in touch with the world and blah.

but some people say my essay is kinda suicidal mainly because of the movie....
is it really dangerous and a bad topic to write on?
jeziker   
Dec 28, 2008
Undergraduate / My Seventh Continent. Commonapp essay showing that I am suicidal? [10]

heehee yes my screen name is a derivation of jessica : )
ok heres my essay but its pretty long...
and english is not my first language so there will be bad wordings and grammar mistakes

THANKS!!
The Seventh Continent. My Seventh Continent.

Among the colorful 3D fonts, the photoshopped faces of celebrities, and the nicely packaged DVD boxes, its simplicity stood out like a rock in a sea of diamonds. A picture of a beach first jumped into my eyes. On the black space that was below the picture were printed three stark red words: "The Seventh Continent". My hands were drawn towards the DVD and the next thing I knew I was at the cashier. That night, I could wait no longer so I called my friends over to find out what was beneath that seemingly dull cover.

The Seventh Continent tells a tragedy of an affluent family which commits suicide for no apparent reason. The first part of the movie depicts the family's daily life in which everything is repetitive and insipid. Ann and Georg, an optician and an engineer respectively, never communicate with their clients; their hands are always swiftly moving over the cash register or the computer and their faces are devoid of emotion. Their daughter Eva, on the other hand, desperately seeks attention from her parents by lies and self-destruction. In the next part of the movie, the family decides to move to Australia. One day Ann and Georg start destroying everything in the house and later commit suicide, through which they wish to be liberated from this world to the Seventh Continent, their dream land.

When the movie was over, I glanced sideways to find my friends either sleeping or playing with their cell phones. But I was jolted by a sudden realization: this movie is a mirror which not only reflects the defects in the society (such as the isolation people experience under capitalism) but also some of the flaws in my way of living.

A complete and caring family, entertaining and loving friends, and a prestigeous school. I had them all. And yet from time to time I felt something was wrong. What was it? I had been asking myself for a few years. Now the answer was exposed before me. It was the monotonous pursuit of meaningless achievement. I saw myself wake up every morning, go to school, sit at the back of the class and stare blankly at the teacher; as long as I kept silent and did not interrupt the lecture I would be considered a well-behaved student. Besides, everything the teacher taught is in the books. After school, classmates and I started entertaining each other with trivia in daily lives; we laughed for 30 minutes and we departed for home. When I got home, I walked straight to my room to do homework or cram up answers for questions on past exam papers. I found myself used to or, even worse, complacent about this way of living, so accustomed that I was oblivious to the real world which can be dynamic and vital.

Despite the epiphany I experienced after the movie, I did not sympathize with Ann and Georg; in fact, I despised them for choosing self-destruction as their last resort. I understood that the dreadful and disturbing ending was an artistic device used to highlight the despair in Ann and Georg and the only way to force the audience to reflect. I must admit the film achieved its purpose. However, self-destruction was deplorable to me. It was a sign of weakness and immaturity. It was the same as children pulling their hair out because they could not play with their favorite toys.

I did not want to be anything like Ann or Georg. Merely watching news or documentaries on TV and reading TIME or National Geographic could no longer satisfy my desire to crush the wall between the world and me. Every night I craddled myself to sleep by imagining that I was lying on the tundra in Northern Canada or trotting through the deep sand of Sahara desert. Every day when I took the bus, I envisioned how my life might change when I grew up and underwent successes and failures. But there is no point dreaming if the dreams can not come true. So when a chance I decided to get out of my castle by changing my learning environment: from my present school to an international school.

That was the first step and it was never easy for me. I was torn between deeply rooted traditional Chinese culture I was comfortable with and the multi-variegated cultures that I was not used to. For the first time I had classmates of different ethnicities and nationalities. In class, there was never an answer waiting to be found at the end of the book or in the teachers' manual. Sometimes I had to come up with the questions and methods of investigation myself amd sometimes there was not always an answer in the end. Some of my friends asked me why I made the choice if I knew that I was not going to feel comfortable about it, calling me a masochist because I like to put myself in discomfort. I said no. I like the process of overcoming discomfort and becoming a new person. As I learned to accept different peoples, viewpoints, and ways of doing things I started to enjoy the excitement that the new environment brought through activities such as exchange trips to Vietnam and Japan and volunteer work at the Spastics Association in which I was always surprised to see a different facet of the world.

The wall is starting to crumble. I now see the world through various small peep-holes. But no matter what, I am already one step closer to my own Seventh Continent, in which I can embrace the world as a whole, sooner or later.

thanks !!
jeziker   
Dec 29, 2008
Undergraduate / My Seventh Continent. Commonapp essay showing that I am suicidal? [10]

thanks a lot!!!!!!

yah its georg...cos the film is in German so i guess its sort of like a German version of George

oh and im kinda concern about the content...i mean its quite long and im afraid its gonna bore the adcom to death : P
jeziker   
Dec 31, 2008
Undergraduate / NU supp - an album named "Life at NU". [NEW]

happy new year!!!
i think the whole essay is too wordy...but dunno how to cut it down : (
____________________________________________________________ _________

A year ago I was clicking through my friend's facebook profile and saw an album named "Life at NU". Pictures of her flashed in front of my eyes: sometimes she was wearing a purple jumper cheering in a sea of purple students; sometimes she was playing poker in her room with her roomates; sometimes she was holding a pen and kneeling beside the Rock. Then I stopped at one picture. She was lying on the grass, with a cup of Starbucks coffee in her right hand and physics notes in her left hand. Before her was a vast lake covered by mist. Later I found out that lake is the Lake Michigan and it is right beside Northwestern University. I was enchanted.

This year I scoured all available sources for more information about NU. Even though I never get a chance to visit the campus, I was able to solicit information from my friend who just went to NU last year and from my father's friend who went there 30 years ago. Their comments range from "an extremely beautiful campus - one of the most beautiful in the States - especially in fall" to "small student to faculty ratio and large endowment for teaching and research". Presently I am studying in an international school where classes have less than 20 students and I find a big difference in the attention received from my current teachers compared to my previous school with classes of 35 students! A university that holds classes of 200 students in an auditorium is not very appealing to me.

One factor that attracts me to NU's Weinberg College of Arts and Sciences is its emphasis on a broad-based education. Even though I concentrated on science in my course of IB program, I thoroughly enjoy my IB English and IB Chinese classes I am taking now as they allow me to find out more about the world from another point of view. I hope I can continue such courses and explore different areas of knowledge like psychology and philosophy in Weinberg.

On the other hand, Science has been my favorite subject since primary school. Originally I liked it because it was the only subject that allowed me to get out of the classroom so that I did not have to sit stiffly in my chair staring at the blackboard.In middle school, chemistry and biology intrigued me the most. In high school, I concentrated on chemistry and biology for chemistry shows me the detailed workings of biology on a Molecular level while biology provides a larger context for chemistry. chemistry and biology are everywhere; reactions in my brain, my neurons, and my muscles are working together as I am composing this essay.

But what I find most interesting about science is that for every question answered there is another question hiding beneath, like an infinite onion.The process of satisfying my curiosity is endless and the journey of finding answers to challenging questions is extremely exciting to me.

I am especially interested in Weinberg's chemistry Department, particularly organic chemistry because it ties with what I learnt in biology and I was unfortunately not able to learn about it in high school in detail. To me, chemistry explains nature in detailed and concrete terms while biology gives a context to the questions which arised in chemistry and those subjects are great for a person like me who pays close attention to details and wants to get an explanation for everything. I still vividly remember seeing Rocky swallowing half a dozen raw eggs in the movie and I had just read my biology textbook about lysozyme - an anti-bacterial enzyme abundant in egg white. I asked myself if Rocky was going to knock out all his stomach bacteria in addition to his opponents in the ring. To answer that I wrote a paper "How acidity affects the antibacterial activity of lysozyme". I did not get an answer after going through half a dozen failed experiments, but the process of finding the answer was extremely fulfilling. Now that I know how Lysozyme basically works in the human stomach, I wish to learn the detailed mechanism on how stomach acid may alter Lysozyme's chemical structure. I know Weinberg emphasize undergraduate independent research (Undergraduate Success in Science Program) and I know this is my cup of tea. All in all what NW is offering and what I am seeking have a lot in common.

I truly hope I could one day have a "Life at NU" album on my own facebook page, with pictures of me lying beside Lake Michigan with my coffee and chemistry notes.
jeziker   
Jan 1, 2009
Student Talk / Common Application Essay won't upload! [40]

are most of your deadlines on 1/2 or 1/1?
if they are on 1/2 then i guess we can wait till tmr?
or deadline on 1/2 actually means before 1/1 midnite D :
jeziker   
Jan 1, 2009
Student Talk / Common Application Essay won't upload! [40]

MINE IS STILL NOT WORKING AND ITS STARTING TO GET ANNOYING.
sorry for the aggressiveness.

seriously?they fixed it?
jeziker   
Jan 1, 2009
Student Talk / Common Application Essay won't upload! [40]

Solution: Thank you for contacting the Support Team.

We apologize for the inconvenience you are experiencing and appreciate your patience. Please try to upload your document again in about 1 hour.

Again, thank you for contacting us; please do so again if you need additional assistance with this incident.

Regards,
The Support Team

hmmm
jeziker   
Jan 1, 2009
Student Talk / Common Application Essay won't upload! [40]

ok. still not working
do you have to log out and log in again after an hour?
or u just leave it there?
goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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