Undergraduate / "it's an adrenaline rush" - NYU- What intrigues you [4]

I'm Looking to get some feed back on the short essay, this is my first draft.

As Eminem once said,"it's an adrenaline rush to feel the bass thump
In the place all the way to the parking lot". In one sense music is like a dose of adrenaline when in the hands of an athlete preparing to hit the field with confidence. In another, music gives a social movement a voice or an identity, connecting like minded individuals by sound. Furthermore music can also create a suspenseful atmosphere in a scene that racks up the nerves of the viewers. Like water which takes the shape of its container, the power of music takes shape in the context of it's use. The ample amount of purposes music can take on is something which is truely amazing and i find intriguing.

Music is the essence of my being. I'll go hours on end listening to everything from Wu-tang Clan to Hans Zimmer. When I'm with friends I get carried off explaining why a song hits the way it does by analyzing the production and songwriting. Music is like no other media, I can express myself in a creative manner and have others connect to what I make and use it however they like. That is what I love about music.