Undergraduate / 'an aspiring Accountant' - recommendation essay for rutgers [7]

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Undergraduate / 'an aspiring Accountant' - recommendation essay for rutgers [7]

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One can define goal as an achievement one's directed effort or tasks, essentially these tasks of desire can vary from person to person. Most goals start out as untenable and distant; however, through perseverance these once unreachable goals can be successful accomplishments.

My desire to attend Rutgers will not only assist me obtaining my goals but expand my wisdom in a vast variety of areas of learning, in addition to creating my pathway to become a future accountant. When people hear Rutgers they think of a symbol of success, which is why I'm choosing this school and ultimately, achieving a diploma and a successful career.

Unfortunately, everything we need to succeed in life, career, and education will not come easy and there are no exceptions, not even for me. So if I'm accepted into Rutgers I strongly believe that the great facilities, teachers, peers, and knowledge readily that is available to me will make my expectations realistic. I'm looking forward to making my dreams become a reality and state to Rutgers that our goals are one in the same. So I ask Rutgers to help me achieve the greatest opportunity that can only come once in a lifetime.

Undergraduate / 'an aspiring Accountant' - recommendation essay for rutgers [7]

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