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Sep 2, 2012
Undergraduate / 'keep on learning' - Common App Transfer Essay Prompt [5]
I like your ending its very admirable, however, I believe you say a lot without really saying much, you talk about who you want to be but how is an LAC suppose to help you? I understand why you want to transfer but in minor detaila. What I got out of your essay is that you did not like your current state university and now you want transfer to a LAC. Im still baffled why you are in a CC now? You need to explain all of this ask yourself why and write. Maybe should make a comparison of a Liberal Art College vs. your state university so you can show what's appealing you to transfer into a LAC. Than talk about how the liberal art school can transform you into what you always wanted to be... which I would like to know by the way.
I like your ending its very admirable, however, I believe you say a lot without really saying much, you talk about who you want to be but how is an LAC suppose to help you? I understand why you want to transfer but in minor detaila. What I got out of your essay is that you did not like your current state university and now you want transfer to a LAC. Im still baffled why you are in a CC now? You need to explain all of this ask yourself why and write. Maybe should make a comparison of a Liberal Art College vs. your state university so you can show what's appealing you to transfer into a LAC. Than talk about how the liberal art school can transform you into what you always wanted to be... which I would like to know by the way.