Writing Feedback / Topic: studying abroad & studying in Viet Nam [NEW]

Some people would like to attend universities in VN while others love studying abroad. Although both studying abroad or studying in VN satisfy a thirty of knowledge of students as well as those universities supply students a degree of bachelor, there are some differences between them in terms of expenses, living and studying environment and chances of students to find good jobs after graduating from university.

The most different is expenses. One point is sure that fee of university abroad is more expensive than in Vietnam. For example, fee of one year in local university including two semesters is about 2-3 million VND (approximately 80-100 USD) while it costs thousands dollars in American or English Universities. Moreover, the expense will increase so much when living in a foreign country especially developed countries. Because you must rent a room or spend money on food which is so expensive than your country. In short, the expenses of commodation and fee is the biggest different between studying in University abroad and University locally.

Another difference is living environment. All seem to be so familiar with people in their country from direction, language to food. On the contrary, language is one biggest of barriers. Initially, students will find it so difficult and embarrassed in a new environment, and must take a long time to adapt themselves to foreign countries' culture and tradition as well as to try to integrate in that community. For instance, people must learn the way to share a department or make friends which are completely different from your local country. Even though people maybe find it uneasy to acquainted with food and climate in another country. All in all, living environment is a disadvantage of foreign students.

The thirth remarkable different is studying environment. In fact, curriculums of universties in Vietnam almost are the same which are occupied by theory in majority. Students rarely have chances of practice. And learning time of students must sit on desks at the class leads to make them become passive students. On the contrary, abroad students spend so much time on practice and themselves studying. Moreover, they must read so many kinds of book and the most outstanding of universities abroad is modern curriculums helping them be active students.

Finally, abroad students find it easy to get good jobs with high salary after graduating from universities aborad. While there are still many local students find it hard to get a appropriate job. In reality, companies and enterprises always like to seek employees with their valuable degree of bachelor even though that candidates graduated from a trivial universities abroad.

In conclusion, whether people study in university abroad or not, people also must try to improve their knowledge and work so hard to get good certificates. To me, I prefer studying in university abroad to local one because of its advantages. This aim of essay help students make a decision for choosing where they should study in less complicated

Writing Feedback / Topic : The effect of the illiteracy [3]

No governments wants to have a higher number illiterate people in their country. In fact, the more illiterate there are, the more the country does not develop well. Because illiteracy has an impact on many sectors of a country in terms of causing crime and undevelopement of the nation.

The first effect of illiteracy is that it makes the country develop slowly. A large sum of money in funds of the nation have to support jobless people instead of investing in science or modern technology. The illiterate have to live on the social welfare scheme. As a result of illiteracy, people find it so difficult to have a job without the ability of reading or understanding simple documents. Therefore, the illiterates become a burden of society causes to make the nation poorer.

Another effect is that illiteracy increases in crime. The illiterate who can not read any books or documents; how could they understand huge numbers of written regulations in their society? So, to them, laws are meaningless. This sometimes makes them become unconsciously criminals. For example, they do not know that they disturb the peace or fight with others is to break laws. Another example, my neighborhood, who is illiterate, is abetted to sell forbidden goods. He does not think that it is so serious as it is. As a consequency, he had to spend 5 years in prision.

In conclusion, the illiterates are dependants on the limitted benefit system of the nation. Moreover, it also creates many problems in social secruity system. The government should have appropriate measures to help reduce number of people who can not read and write. The countries will be richer and people will be happier if there is no the illiterates in.