nixgerg
Sep 11, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Japan culture woke me up' - Bioenvironment APPLICATION FORM [3]
you need to correst the essay, as in there are a lot of grammatical errors. ex.growed up shud be grew up
full covered by moss - fully covered with moss
bring to me - brings to me
where my parents works for - where my parents work
where taked care my childhood - where my childhood was taken care of
I remembered when I - i remember when i
which is known by me after a long time - which i have known for a long time. etc.
the content is good!
you need to correst the essay, as in there are a lot of grammatical errors. ex.
the content is good!