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i think the your essay are very good...

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Busy following the daily time table i make for myself, I often find pleasure sitting alone with puppies and ducks which i find around my home. It not only helps me relax to my mind but also have a direct relationship with nature. I often feed them with bread crumbs, which i suppose is their favorite. This brings peace to my mind and helps me resume my work with much more enthusiasm and energy than before.

Essays / Thesis statement about children with gay fathers - Need advice [8]

my father

Outline the topic: my father

1:Intro
2:Body
a,introduction to my father
+,About age,address,or job...
b,The character of my father
+,funny,friendly,loving.caring...
c,My father gave me life's good and true thing
+,provied me with the necessities in life about materal,spirit
+help me about the difficul in my life,taugh me everything about life
3:Conclution

This is outline in my topic,i hope they wil read and edit for me.thank so much....