ykarlina
Sep 18, 2012
Undergraduate / 'answers for why taking computer science'; my curiosity in technology [4]
Help me edit to make it sounds better. and also the grammar. thanks.
In this modern era, it seems that it is impossible to someone for not knowing and developing their knowledge about internet or technology. In this case, that someone is also my self. Growing in this century has caused me curiousity about internet, gaming, application, and even the developing of mobile technologies. At that high curiousity level, I notice that those things are all related to a knowledge called programming. So I decided to dig in about programming, what it is, how can I know more about it, and how can I master it. Those questions are being asked before I knew that programming is a major subject in computer science. Not even a single doubt for not taking this computer science course when I revealed this. So I decided to apply at computer science department in Bogor Agricultural University. The great thing is, an unexpected happiness that I got accepted. A way to accomplish my hope for fulfilling my dreams to never ever stop developing my curiosity in technology, this is my chance to become the person I want to be in future, this is why I take computer science.
Help me edit to make it sounds better. and also the grammar. thanks.
In this modern era, it seems that it is impossible to someone for not knowing and developing their knowledge about internet or technology. In this case, that someone is also my self. Growing in this century has caused me curiousity about internet, gaming, application, and even the developing of mobile technologies. At that high curiousity level, I notice that those things are all related to a knowledge called programming. So I decided to dig in about programming, what it is, how can I know more about it, and how can I master it. Those questions are being asked before I knew that programming is a major subject in computer science. Not even a single doubt for not taking this computer science course when I revealed this. So I decided to apply at computer science department in Bogor Agricultural University. The great thing is, an unexpected happiness that I got accepted. A way to accomplish my hope for fulfilling my dreams to never ever stop developing my curiosity in technology, this is my chance to become the person I want to be in future, this is why I take computer science.